Terrorism is violence or the threat of violence, especially bombing, kidnapping and assassination carried out for political purposes. This is all we know a bad thing. But why do others do this if they know that this is already a bad thing?
There are many things that are a reason of terrorism, and one of them is religion. They always do what they believe in and what do their God’s command. Another reason was the revenge. Once they get humiliated or hurt, they’ll start having revenge as return. Also, power is part of the reason. They want to gain superiority so that people frightens him and never try to come near to him.
But we all hear and saw terrorism in our country and they never stop. We tried our best, but still terrorism grows to our country as the time goes by. How can we stop them? Actually, there are a lot of solutions for this problem. But does the solution solve our problems? Even though we have solutions, there are still new problems that we will encounter. And as we continue solving the problem, there will always be new problem that will be produced.
So the best way is to find a solution that will not give another problem. We should also see what the reason of doing terrorism is. After knowing it, we should base it from their reason without having another additional problem.
But when you failed, don’t stop! Why? Because letting them do terrorism means putting the world in chaos. And no one wants a chaotic world, right? Terrorism must stop at all cost to prevent the reducing of population in our country.
So, terrorism was our problem. But what are we going to do with it? Even though stopping the terrorism is hard, we should never stop trying. We should not let terrorism take over the world. Because making terrorism take over the world means killing is fun. ‘Till there’s no one left in this world because of terrorism. Most of the terrorism is killing, and killing is also reason of reduced in population in our country.
What will be the other cause of terrorism? As we know, most of terrorism is killing. This will not affect not only our population, once terrorism is in the country, people will be frightened and start planning to leave the country. This can also affect in the political aspects. Making them look for suspicious people that makes them take the wrong person. Also, it can affect us to our economic aspects, making others use money for ransom or hiring more guards for protections.
9 comments:
For me, religion is the main reason why there is terrorism. Others don't agree on what other people think what is right. Then that's the time fighting comes.
Terrorism is not just killing. They are just fighting for what they think is right.
If you find the solution that doesn't cause another problem let me know. I agree that religion causes war. Look at the Crusades. Muslims and Christians have been going at it for hundreds of years. No one will stop until one side have been wiped out.
First, there are some errors in grammar. Second, subject and verb in some sentences are not parallel from each other. Third, you have a very good guide questions, questions that pop in your work itself that, made your work good. These questions can make the readers wonder and keep reading because they want the answers.
religion may play a part in terrorism, but i think terrorists just use religious references to justify their actions.
There are some grammatical errors in the 2nd paragraph...
the sentence structure must also be improved...
you have focused more on the existence of the problem yet you have not dicuss on how to solve it...
I agree on what biboy said that terrorism is not just killing but fighting for what they think is right.
And you have a nice way of thinking to say that even we propose another solution to the problem, another problem will just come out, nice idea, very convincing.
For me your post was really great but there are some errors on your sentences. But your post keeps me interested to finish it. My time is not wasted while reading your post.
I agree with biboy. We all have different beliefs. Terrorist don't just kill for the sake of killing. They do it because they believe that what they are doing is right. Although i disagree that religion is the main problem. There are a lot of reasons why terrorism happens.
The article was nice but you should propose solutions to be able to stop terrorism.
Aldrin,
Go to your second paragraph... Who is They?
You need to connect your ideas.
What exactly is your proposed solution?
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