Terrorism is a world-wide problem. It occurs everywhere, from local communities to the largest of cities. People form other beliefs form groups to rebel against certain things in society. It brings fear to nations that are enemies of their group. Their act of rebellion ranging from kidnapping to hijacking brings chaos to a country. Innocent people are most likely the victims of their acts.
When certain groups see things that contradict their beliefs, they tend to fight for it. They use violent methods to silence anyone all who are against them. Usually, they are the cause behind many historical tragedies. Terrorist have different reasons as to why they perform rebellious acts. Most terrorists fight for their religion, which is very common in our generation. Their religion tells them to fight unbelievers (people who are not in their religion or those who do not follow their beliefs). With this in mind, Fanatics from their religion join their group to follow their beliefs. Others fight for their ideologies, ethnicity, and nationalism. They use violent method in order to induce the change they want to see in the current society.
Terrorism brings fear to nations due to frequent attacks on innocent people. Their attacks send a message to the government and the people, as they bring fear to the community. Terrorist groups want the people and the government to fear them in order to control their actions. In turn, this degrades our economy. People lose trust to those nations who have terrorists. Foreign investors fears to invest in our country due to their violent attacks. It would kill firms and business establishments in any country. Thus, the country’s growth is stunted.
Heavily influential, terrorism has greatly affected nations that have been in conflict resulting to war. Victims of terrorism are not limited to people alone, as even the ecosystem and the natural world as a whole are damaged in the process. Billions of dollars has been spent for ammunition during terrorist encounters. Despite the attempts to heal the heavy damages of terrorism on the world, future generations are still liable to suffer from terrorism.
However, we would not like the future generations experience to live in fear. Even so, children from terrorist groups are being trained to use firearms at a very early age. They are trained to kill, educated to terrorize and live a life to fight for their beliefs, or rather, the beliefs instilled into them by their parents. These children will inherit the same concepts of their parents’ beliefs and will continue to pursue their goals. Sadly, terrorism will still exist in the succeeding generations.
Currently, Solutions are now undertaken by the international, national and local communities for they don’t want to be controlled by those terrorist groups. We should be aware that there are no exemptions in regarding who they will attack. Many organization and groups has ways to help in the prevention of terrorist attacks. Schools can educate people how deal in situations when the terrorist groups attacks. It can also educate children to develop love for the society and to be better citizens in their country. Business establishments tighten their security to prevent bombings. Our national security places checkpoints to various highways and posts the faces of the terrorist to warn people. Our national army is planning man-hunt operations to certain terrorists and is in Mindanao to fight terrorist groups that harms the community. However, these solutions can only prevent terrorist attacks and protect the innocent people but it does not entirely wipe out terrorism.
Certain acts are being done within our country, the Philippines. There have been suggestions to ban the religion Islam within the country despite it composing more or less ten percent of the religious population; kill every terrorist, or bomb Mindanao. In relation to religion, many believe that there should only be one religion. Consequently, if the country is ever going to implement such a tactic, a religious war could ensue. In terms of killing terrorists, such an act is at most, if not completely, impossible because these people disguise themselves as normal people in our society. As for bombing Mindanao, it’s a shallow reason and is highly homicidal, as many innocent people could be killed in the process.
Terrorist groups fight for their beliefs. If they could just settle their beliefs in means that are less violent and try to understand how important life is, a peaceful resolution could be attained just like the first and second People Power Revolutions of the past.
- Yuri
15 comments:
There are problems with your grammar, like the sentence, "Our national army is planning man-hunt operations to certain terrorists and is in Mindanao to fight terrorist groups that harms the community." It has some problems in the arrangement and usage of its words. Other than minor grammatical errors, it's a pretty nice work.
On a side note: I agree with you on what you said about "having only one religion" and "bombing Mindanao". Those two 'solutions' shouldn't be done because, just as you said, there would likely be a war , and many people will get harmed in the process. If they do those, they would have lost lives instead of save them.
You did well i npresenting your ideas and how the world's people are reacting to it. Unfortunately, i just couldnt find a concrete solution regarding the said problem. You did tell us what the people are doing, and a general idea of how the terrorists "should" act towards their goal. But its all general, and we need a possible and concrete solution regarding the international threat of terrorism.
Besides the solution part, your presentation and flow of ideas in your article was done in a very good manner. I agree with you in your ideas, its just the general form of your solution part. Over-all, it's really good.
Well, what do we have here? All I can say is, it's very formal and dramatic, like it's trying to make me cry, but it didn't make me cry. The ideas are good, though they tend to be repetitive. Some words are not spelled correctly which can confuse the readers if they're not aware about it. Overall, it's decent.
i agreee with your ideas. however, few grammatical errors can be found and some wwords are not properly used.
one thing i would like to say is that yyour ideas are somehow one-sided. it is all about the religion and stuff. you are saying that islam is the cause of terrorism?
all in all, your post about terrorism is very good :)
You should have added some examples to emphasize the "international" idea. But all the solutions and ideas were convincing.
your article is prety good, its just like your ideas just flows in your head.
my comment here is that it only have one paragraph.you have no indentions as well.
Good stuff about terrorism. Keep it up..
your post/article is quite difficult to read. you should separate each paragraph with different topics.
i doesn't agree that bombing Mindanao or killing all Islams will wipe out terrorist. i believe that there's more solution other than bloodshed.
Your ideas are well explained, but it will be better if you did not concentrate on religion only. There are other reason why there is terrorism.
But i like your solutions. Fighting back is not a good idea.
I agree in your post that we should have only one religion.
I also observed that you have minor errors in using your words and I cannot find find a clear solution n your said problem.
good work urii!!
commentz:
~ some of the subtopics on your text are just repeating.
~ your solutions are not clear.
~ you're just focusing on the topic about the religion.
----thatz all.,
*bow*
it is good that you have a lot to say about this issue. the work sounded very heartfelt.
from the explanation, I didn't like the way they kill terrorist. Because what if he was just accused? What if that person is innocent? And you cannot kill of the terrorist. There are billions of population in a country, and you will not be able to know which one is a terrorist...
I definitely agree with your argument that spiritual belief is the reason that makes peoples argue with each other. It could have been much better if all the religions would respect each other in the first place.
Check your verbs specially with pronouns and nouns.
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