ENERGY CRISIS
I. The Nature of The Problem
The energy crisis is beginning to damage our Mother Nature and we might not have our home soon. It has grown to an alarming level and is more than just affecting the whole world. This is because of rising fuel prices, lifestyles that are dependent on oil, energy consumption, abusive transport use, crude oil pirces increase, the world market and the involvement of many other nations, oil extraction efficiency, and over-population. Our abundant forests and animals are beginning to decrease in population and the things we were able to enjoy in our current lifestyles may not be available anymore in the future.
II. Establish The Existence of The Problem
• A crisis could possibly emerge after infrastructure damage from severe weather.
• Disruption of oil and gas production that may create shortages
• Dependence of the majority of the people of the world on the many uses of oil
• Massive growth in global demand
• Consumption of energy
• The ruining of our forests
• The world's population continues to grow at a quarter of a million per day, increasing the consumption of energy.
• Abuse of resources
III. Explain The Existence of The Problem
The energy crisis can be connected to a lot of things in our lives. Example, we have been using cars even for short distances when we could be using bicycles and path walks instead. Also, we consume too much LPG everyday when we could only use it once and use electric stoves or other alternatives. Oil prices increase when important infrastructures are damaged.
IV. Explain Its Effects and Why It Needs To Be Solved
The energy crisis is keeping the prices high and just might put an end to the comfortable little luxuries that we have right now at our disposal. The rapid changes in weather brought about by mankind’s alterations in nature only worsen our situation.
This calls for a solution because our world should not be thrown away like this. We should take care of it and make it the perfect place to be in for the children of our future.
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8 comments:
your paragraph is amazing. i like the content of it. you really follow directions. i agree with you that we should take care our planet for the future of mankind.
nice work... you arranged it well. i like the way you started, that we should save mother earth... :D
Your post was really good. But my only comment in your post, its not indented and its not essay type but anyway the content was supported of good solutions.
You enumerated the existence of the problem in a way that it is very understandable and very true. You also explained its existence and effects very well. It's short but i like it. Nice work.
what you have written is more of a draft..you should write it in an essay form....
the problem was well dicussed but you should also propose solutions that would solve the problem..
I love the content, but the paper is still a draft and written in the format miss gave us for our prewrite.
This is very well done, although the format is still in outline form. And the starting sentence was a really good way to catch people's attention concerning Earth.
Nikki,
This looks like the problem outline uploaded. I had asked you to write the problem-solution text. Kindly review the notes I gave. You have a lot of work to do in the revising portion. Go back to the drawing board.
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