Conflicts in our world and society today are inevitable. Different people need different things in many different ways. And so, these people act for their goals. Such as terrorist, which in every place and corner of our world spreads terrorism. Terrorist are people who do bad things or things that brings fear to many people in order to achieve their goal. Many people are affected by the acts of this terrorist and that as we call it, terrorism. Every continent, every country, every state, and even in our own homes, terrorism may be applied. But there are different degrees of terrorism.
The most problematic level is the world class terrorism. The best example for a world class terrorist attack is the 9/11. We all know what happened to the twin towers and pentagon. But what solution did the United States of America did? War, war against these terrorist which cause more death, death to US military troops, death to the terrorist, but even so, many innocent people died. So i guess that is not the best solution. Maybe a discussion of needs, not announcing of demands, can solve all this. Or even just lessen the deaths of people.
Another terrorism problem we have is just in our country. The MILF and Abu Sayaf terrorist group in Mindanao. Just like the US government, our government also used the violent solution. And guess what, what results do we have? I think were not even close to having peace in our country. So in this case, I think that peace talk solution can still be applied here.
Now this is the critical part, terrorism in our own home or in ourselves. How can I say that even such terrorism exist? Well in the first place, how do people end up as terrorist? Logically speaking, people in their surroundings has an impact in their lives. For example, how could you say that a kid would not end up a terrorist in the future if his father is a murderer and his mother is a prostitute? Or his friends or companions in school are violent people? Well to wrap things up, youth needs to have correct education and right manners so terrorist in the future would be less than there is today. Youth today must learn to have the correct judgment in human rights so adults in the future will know the correct decision which connects to their doings that will affect the people around them.
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I agree. Educate your sons and daughters to have them not ending up being as a terrorist.
even though it has less solution, the idea of this article is good. he stated that future terrorist can be made by us which is true.
Please provide other reasons and solutions regarding this topic. The rest of what you did is good.
I like the way you used the inverted pyramid... you gave what terrorism means, and where can it exist, then gave the 9/11 as an example and siting terrorism here in our country. I agree that everything starts at our home/surroundings; that it will affect us on what are we going to be in the future... also, i agree that war wont solve anything, it will just worsen the situation... your work is great, but the paragraphs are not indented... but overall, its a nice work :D
ahm..the structure is really good.the solution you proposed to solve this problem is good also...however,.i noticed that you used only limited references and resources..try to research more and add more vital information about this problem,research more on the other possible and efficient solutions.
Igi,
This is a relatively short for a problem-solution text. It looks very much opinionated with very little facts.
To jazz up your problem, use the problem outline I had asked you to do. There are four elements in that outline which should help you establish the problem quite clearly.
For the middle ground, you may want to critique only one attempt that is being undertaken then discuss its effects/advantages / disadvantages.
Finally, what do you propose to do? Think about it this very well.
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